REALFormidableFoe's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dragonball Z: Fury (ep.1)]

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Saiya-jin-Prince responds:

yes...... i see the logic in your words

[Chipmunks Gangsta Rap]

best movie ever

SERIOUSLY THIS IS THE BEEESST MOVIE EVER!!!!!!!! I AM DEAD SERIOUS NOTHING ON NG COMPARES TO THIS!!

[Newgrounds The Movie]

GENIUS

Wish i woulda thought of that..O wait i did, but im too lazy to make a movie. Fuck ur grandmothers!! ALL OF U!!

mmark-oldflash responds:

Oddly enough, I actually thought this up the day I made it.

[Real American Zeros]

Needs More Real Animation

Nice little clip. Not too funny except for the Time magazine. Work on your animation and make something fully animated, not just clips of pictures. You will get a better score if you learn to draw.

[Shaw's Nightmare I (1.2)]

My Favortie First-Timer

I have seen quite a few first Newgrounds submissions from different people and they mostly blow. This one was excellent. I laughed my ass off throughout the whole thing. What a wicked imagination you have. Great, great stuff. I don't know why it doesn't have a better rating. Good job, I'll be keeping up with you.

[-DirectTV-]

Please Don't Use Sticks

I LOVE seeing advertisement mockery done humorously in Flash. This one was good too. You used MAC Speech instead of just captions and that was cool, but the captions were unprofessional looking, if anyone cares. But please, PLEASE don't use sticks in something this short. For a 30 second animation it is worth it to put in the extra time to animate faces and bodies. Do that and this would be a 3 or higher. 2/5

[Blow Up]

LONGER

INCREDIBLE!!! Animation. Absolutely incredible. But get something longer, add sound, I think you know how to make a good Flash.

[MGS: Shopping]

Some Suggestions

Good stuff. Nice animation ("cute") and storyline. Good overall job!

- I noticed that your animation completely lacks shading. There some basic gradients but nothing more. Add some realistic shading.

- Although the head (especially the eyes) were hilariously big, it takes away from the rest of the motion in the body when it is tweened. So I would reduce the head size.

- Add background music, oh and the sound effect were pretty good and well placed.

Keep it up, muchacho.

Oh and please, please don't do another Zelda Flash... I can't tell you how old those have become.

MetalMaverick responds:

The head size thing is done on purpose mainly to better express the characters emotions, so I'm not sure if I should reduce it. As for the Zelda flash, I think you'll like the idea I have planned for it.