REALFormidableFoe's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Stone Trek: Episode Eight]

Why Isn't This Feature of the Day?

Yeah, I played Domo Kun and that is small beans compared to this.

Excellent all around, except for the voices. Alot of times I could barely understand what was going on. I suggest using captions.

You should have had feature of the day.

[Rent-A-Clock-3000™]

Why in the blue FUCK is this Feature of the Day?

It's nice but fuck if iut deserves feature of the day.

zipstyke responds:

Heh, it was a slow day.. I was thinking about 3rd to 5th, not first...

Hahaha

[S. Sheep & The Sea-Saw]

I LOVE S. Sheep

I'd say S. Sheep is by far the best under 30 second series on NG. Hilarious, cute, but horribly mean to that poor sheep. I laugh out loud every time. Poor sheep.

[William Tell]

Good But I Don't Know...

Well I don't know why it has a 3.40. It is like 30 seconds long. The credits are longer than the feature itself.

But you do have great animation skills and stuff. Just make it a lil' longer.

I wouldn't worry so much about ending credits, but I must say I loved your opening credits. A Side Note : Not that I care - but you said the feature is Copyrighted... I doubt it :-P.

Good job, I would love to see a full-length feature from you, I am gonna go see what else you've done.

[Arrogancy: AS - Decision]

I Know It Is Insanley Hard But Still...

It's INCREDIBLE animation. However, like people have said, the backgrounds aren't great. The main complaint is it does run SLLOOWW. It would be easier for you time wise just to shorten it up.

I also don't really get the point of the trailer...

But I still can't get over how great the character animation is.

Is it great : Yes
Does it deserve feature of the day : Definitely not.

[Drive Sober]

Great Stuff

Great animation except for a few instances (one in particular is when the hand appears to open the door before it is open) when the animation is choppy.

I love seing serious animation on Newgrounds, and your message was an excellent one to finally be broadcast with Flash.

Baystream responds:

Yeah I know, sorry 'bout the door part. It was crappy mostly because I was rushing to get this movie done. Maybe I'll release a more clean version of it sometime, with more sound effects.

[not stick SKATER movie]

Definitely Underdog of the Week

This definitely could be great. I think you have excellent animation skills and a nack for Flash (judging by some of your other submissions)

- Add a face to the guy...
- Add shading and tecture
- Color is a plus
- So is music
- Longer... I know it is time consuming.
- Add some bails. Just for shits and giggles.

Or don't because this is cool as it is.

[Hostage Situation 2]

No Question, Best Flash Ever

I can't make any suggestions. You are incredible. This deserves Top 3 in The Portal. Incredible. The only thing I could suggest is get a better mic, the voice-over were a little rough.

[Demons]

Nice Job

Very nice first attempt. Your animation was great for a first try. Here are a few suggestions...

- The second voice spoke somewhat quickly and for effect I would slow down.

- Take more time in facial animation. Smooth out the features and try top proportionalize the face to the body. The close up looked too thin and rushed.

- Work on textures... your rain was nice but the lightning was too jumbled and that soudn effect scared me.

~ Along with that, when the guy kills the spider, that brick backround is - sorry - nasty. Try to develop more creative backgrounds with some color.

Lastly, you obviously have talent and I look forward to your next submission. Make it longer and add an actual story line. (Hint : Humor in the next one would be a plus...) Peace!

=+= Jon =+=